I Command You Follow The Rule of Three (Unless You Don't Want to)
I am a rule follower.
So when people say "Remember the rule of three," I cut
incidents out of my story. Then they say
"Remember aim for 14 spreads." Then I squint my eyes, wrinkle my nose, and
say "Aw sassafras*."
*I have been caught
saying other things in front of the kids recently, so I am working on using 'sassafras.'
Oh the Rule of Three.
Three bears. Three porridges. Three attempts. Three. Three. Three.
And I get it. In a
short story. House of sticks, house of
straw, house of bricks, wolf in the pot.

So I studied some picture books. The
majority are concept books which don't follow the rule. Then there are traditional story books where I
couldn't tease out a three.
First the rules
breakers:
In The Monster at the End of This Book (Stone, 1971) Grover makes
four attempts to keep kids from turning (telling you not to, tying the pages,
nailing the pages, and a brick wall).
In The Nicest Naughtiest Fairy (Ward, 2008) the well-behaved naughty
fairy makes 5 attempts to help friends and fails royally all 5 times. Spread 1: Opening, Spreads 2-9: Five Attempts
& Fails, Spreads 10-12: Resolution.
My brain wants to write books this way, and here is proof it can be
done.
I found ONE perfect
three in Ella Sarah Gets Dressed (Chodos-Irvine, 2003).
Spread 1: Opening, S2-7: 3 Suggestions/3 "no's," S8-14
Resolution. The illustrations allow the
resolution to be spread out over such a long stretch. It was a Caldecott Honor book after all.
The Boy who Cried Ninja (Latimer, 2011) offers a double three. ½ spread
introduces MC & Problem. S1-3: Show
the first 3 problem causers. S4: MC
makes a decision. S5-7: Show 3 new problem causers. S8-9: MC takes action. S10-14 Resolution. This is a pleasing use of the rule of three.
The Knuffle Bunny (Willems, 2004) uses a triple three. S1:
Intro, S2-3: three places on way to laundromat, S4-6: the problem, S7-9: Trixie's
three attempts to tell Dad the problem, S10-11: The lowest low is reached,
S12-13: three places on the way back to the Laundromat, S14-15½: Resolution
So what does it all
mean?
Three is a good rule.
You can use threes in several ways.
You don't have to follow the rule.
Sound off - what do you think about the rule of three?
Love the rule of three. A key rule for PBs, I think; three's enough to create a pattern, but not enough to make the story tedious.
ReplyDeleteBy the way, when I am grumpy and around my son, I often find myself talking about shiitake mushrooms.
I worked on a ms last night after my analysis. I was able to build each of the three incidents so it covered 9 spreads (at least I think.) With an opening spread and a few resolution spreads, it seems to work.
DeleteBut sometimes with three you end up with a lot of mush until the resolution. And you know mush is a pile of shiitake mushrooms.
I love all the shiitake talk. I'm not too good with rule of three but then I prefer to write concept books. It's such a shame they are a hard sell.
DeleteCatherine - I tell ya, most of the board books in my closet are concept books. Even though the majority of the 4-8 year old range are not concept books, there are a fair number of concept books, including some very popular ones (If You Give a Mouse a Cookie, etc)
DeleteSometimes I get frustrated with all the rules, especially when I try to study PB and find that it does not always apply. Can't we just write? Sometimes I feel the technical aspect of writing gets in the way of my creativity.
ReplyDeleteYour frustration is the one which makes me want to move to middle grade at times - just to find a little more creative flow. The PB rules form a kind of ugly box. The challenge is to improve my writing until I can write my way out of a box!
DeleteHi Lauri! I wanted you to know I left you an award on my blog, Ink in the Book blogspot. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteTalynn
Thank you for the Liebster nomination! I really appreciate it, and I enjoyed getting to know you through all your award answers.
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